Paved With Verbs
​
​College Admissions Counseling
***
Life Coaching
  • Home
  • About
  • Services
  • Oxford-Style Tutorials
  • Contact
  • Blog
  • Life Coaching
  • Payments

Blog
Advice to Get You Started on Your Applications -- And, hopefully, Improve Your Whole Life :)

How to Write Your Optional COVID-19 Essay on the Common App

9/9/2020

3 Comments

 
Picture
Overall, the essay prompts on the Common Application don't change much from year to year — but 2020 brings a notable exception. 

In response to the maelstrom that is 2020, the Common App has added a new, optional essay in the Additional Information section:

Community disruptions such as COVID-19 and natural disasters can have deep and long-lasting impacts. If you need it, this space is yours to describe those impacts. Colleges care about the effects on your health and well-being, safety, family circumstances, future plans, and education, including access to reliable technology and quiet study spaces.

Please use this space to describe how these events have impacted you (250 word maximum).*

In general, I don't really consider "optional" essays to be optional. If you have the option of writing an essay for a school and you choose not to, it says something about your level of commitment and priorities.

This one is a little different, since it's not a school-specific essay, and they don't expect you to relive trauma you're not ready to relive.

However, as I wrote in ​CRUCIAL Advice for Students Whose Summer Plans Were Disrupted by COVID-19:
All high school students have lost some kind of opportunity because of this pandemic, whether it's your shot at making varsity or a summer internship or a teen travel opportunity.

That is why, even if you don't feel you have experienced deep trauma because of COVID, you can still use this space as an opportunity to demonstrate some of the skills colleges value most in applicants:

  • Resourcefulness​
  • Maturity in the pursuit of your learning
  • Curiosity
  • Purpose
  • Resilience

If your summer abroad program or science fair or summer sports season was canceled because of the pandemic, TELL THEM. Tell them how hard you worked for that opportunity, tell them WHY you worked so hard for that opportunity, and tell them HOW you still managed to learn some of what you'd hoped to learn this summer... and maybe even talk about some growth or insight you gained because of the disappointment.

I've heard of college counselors telling students not to answer this question if they don't personally know someone who has died...

But that's just dumb. 

It's dumb college application advice, and it's dumb life advice. 

Don't ever demean or disparage your own pain, just because someone else hurt more or differently from you. You aren't only entitled to have your own experience...

You are also entitled to OWN your own experience.

In college admissions, and in life. 

Of course, in a situation like this, in which others clearly have suffered more greatly than you, it's worth acknowledging their suffering without undermining your own.

Perhaps something to the effect of:
All things considered, I'm very lucky — I haven't lost a loved one, I'm not immunocompromised, and my parents are able to work from home, so our financial security has not been affected. Nevertheless...

But then quickly pivot to talking about yourself — highlighting some of those desirable traits like resilience and resourcefulness that I mentioned above.

You might even think of this as a space to show how you have made better use of this time than other teenagers.

So, for example, here is​ how I would approach this essay as my 17-year-old self:

1. What is interesting/special/unique about me that I haven't had a chance to share yet? 

  • I've spent four years studying Latin and one year studying Greek. I don't know if I want to major in classics, but it's been a huge part of my life.
  • I'm late for almost every class — because I'm always staying late having interesting discussions with my teacher from the previous class. 
  • For my senior project, I am writing a full-length play; I have already written and directed one full-length play for my school's drama club.
  • I loved AP Stats.

2. In what ways did COVID disrupt my plans -- and what did I do instead?
  • After years of studying "dead" languages and ancient history, I was excited to study in Italy over the summer. 
  • COVID made me realize just how important face-to-face, unplanned interactions are to growth, friendship, and creativity.
  • Writing a play isn't as fun when the future of the theater is uncertain and I'll probably never get to produce my play

Given this, here is one draft I could use for this essay: 

I know keto is all the rage right now—but I spent much of junior year on the “AP Stats Diet.”

At least, that’s what my friends would joke when I’d dash into the dining hall with only seven minutes until 5th period, then grab whatever banana or sandwich I could consume on the move. 

The cause of my delay was discussions with my AP Stats teacher—not about the homework, but about I could apply topics we’d covered in class to the way I read the news, the way I play poker, and even the methods I apply in my APUSH papers. Because of these conversations, I wrote two papers and one Exonian article based on my own original data analysis. One of those papers, “Feminism and Fidelity,” ultimately won the Exeter History Prize. 

When COVID struck, it highlighted a part of my life I’d always taken for granted: 

Regular, unplanned interactions with mentors and classmates.

Sitting alone in my room at the end of a Zoom class, I felt a panging hunger I used to spontaneously sate with ideas, jokes, and discussions. I realized just how many important discussions happen in informal settings—and how seldom these become when all interaction is scheduled and conducted remotely. 

COVID-19 brought unimaginable pain to countless citizens around the world; compared to those who lost their lives, loved ones, and homes, I’ve suffered very little. However, I have gained a tremendous appreciation for the value of informal, face-to-face interactions with peers and teachers alike, and I will never take that for granted again.

It's a great little essay because it shows my sense of humor (don't try to be funny if you're not funny, but do try to showcase your unique personality); my eagerness to learn beyond the scope of school assignments and apply my learning cross-disciplinarily (something every top school is looking for in their applicants); an impressive accomplishment of mine; and a personally meaningful insight I gained because of COVID. 

**AS A SIDE NOTE: A major theme of this essay is mentorship. When I conduct alumni interviews, the single most important question I ask is, "Tell me about an important relationship you have with an adult who is not part of your family." If you can't answer that question, I will not recommend you for admission. It's weird not to have at least one mentor — especially if you're a high-achiever. Like, what? You're some world-class violinist, but you don't have a good relationship with your violin teacher? What does that say about you? So if you haven't built good relationships with your teachers, DO THAT NOW. Not only is it likely to come up in your college interviews, but your recommendations are an important, and often overlooked, part of your application. 

If you're already a senior and you don't feel like you have a strong relationship with your recommenders, I highly, highly recommend forming one right now — and your best bet might be by signing up for an Oxford-style tutorial, which is the fastest way to build a close intellectual relationship with someone who can write you a letter of recommendation. **

    Want to know more about Oxford-Style Tutorials? Contact me! 

Submit

Here is another way I might approach this essay, given the same set of bullet points from my last brainstorm: 
They say Latin is a “dead language”—good thing I have the power of resurrection! 

It started with lively certamenes (contests) in the Classics Library on Fridays, then progressed to annual medals in the National Latin Examination and top-ten finishes in the New Hampshire Latin Competition. Before I knew it, Latin started popping up in the most unexpected places. 

John F. Kennedy speeches began feeling eerily reminiscent of Cicero, prompting a paper that my teacher called, “The most unique and interdisciplinary APUSH paper I’ve ever seen—Excellent!” AP Physics readings turned to post-class discussions about lidar, lasers, and ancient Roman ruins, prompting a final project my teacher lauded as “truly inspired—mythology meets methodology!”

After three years of bringing Latin alive, I was crushed when my dream of attending Study Abroad Experience in Italy died.

After an appropriate mourning period, I decided to fill the void with food—specifically, I designed an “immersive,” at-home exploration of the ancient Roman diet. After reading Tom Standage’s A History of the World in 6 Glasses and An Edible History of Humanity to gain historical context, I began recreating recipes from the world’s first cookbooks. Realizing how much “natural” foods, from beef to grapes to greens, have changed due to selective breeding and genetic engineering, I decided to maximize authenticity by foraging as many wild plants as possible. Hence, I ordered Edible Wild Plants, by John Kallas. 

Though still eager to see Roman ruins come to life post-pandemic, I’m grateful to have experienced this entirely new approach to learning.

​

This essay shows tremendous intellectual playfulness and creativity, and shows why I'm passionate about Latin. "Interdisciplinary" is a theme here, as even my independent summer pursuit included a book about botany. 

Whichever essay I end up choosing to submit with my Common Application, I know I've told and demonstrated a lot of very cool things about myself by taking the time to write this "optional" essay.

Want help writing yours? Check out my Rates and Services, and Contact Me to set up an appointment! 

    Need Help With Your College Essays? Contact Me!

Submit
3 Comments
Travis Garner link
11/13/2022 04:52:26 am

Shoulder wide save shake economy. Spend smile local begin easy alone anything.
A nature similar else dog structure choice.

Reply
Jack In The Box Survey link
1/23/2024 09:11:46 pm

Jack Listens is a renowned food department store in the United States, offering a valuable opportunity for its customers to provide feedback through a survey. By participating in this survey at https://jacklistenscom.page/, customers have the chance to win two Tacos coupons as a token of appreciation. This initiative serves as a means to enhance customer satisfaction and continuously improve their overall experience at Jack Listens.

Reply
jacklistens.com survey link
12/31/2024 08:39:44 am

Jacklistens is a brilliant illustration of how organizations can use client criticism to drive achievement. By giving a stage to clients to share their encounters,

Reply



Leave a Reply.

    Author

    Eva Glasrud completed her B.A. and M.A. at Stanford. She is now a college counselor and life coach for gifted youth.

    Archives

    October 2022
    May 2022
    July 2021
    September 2020
    May 2020
    April 2020
    August 2019
    April 2019
    January 2019
    October 2018
    May 2018
    September 2017
    August 2017
    July 2017
    June 2017
    April 2017
    October 2016
    September 2016
    July 2016
    January 2016
    December 2015
    October 2015

    Categories

    All
    College Admissions
    Creativity
    Essay Help
    Life Coaching
    Meaning
    Purdue
    Purpose
    Stanford
    UC
    UNC
    University Of California
    University Of Southern California
    USC

    RSS Feed

Proudly powered by Weebly
Photos from fjing229, SchuminWeb (CC BY-SA 2.0), mytradingskills, alusch, Scudamore's Punting Company, verchmarco, Photographing Travis, shixart1985, ropaisus, ogungo, Michael Dunn~!, MrJamesBaker, fdecomite, Michael Dunn~!, SchuminWeb, Homedust
  • Home
  • About
  • Services
  • Oxford-Style Tutorials
  • Contact
  • Blog
  • Life Coaching
  • Payments